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名师解读雅思议论文写作中的三结构
核心提示:写雅思大作文就如同在建筑一座大楼一般。首先是进行大楼结构设计,然后再进行实际的建筑工程,最后经过装修而成为耐用而漂亮的大楼。良好的结构对于大楼的实用以及美观有着非常重要的作用。同样道理,良好的作文结构也将提高文章的质量和成绩。从一定意义上来说,优秀的作文结构可以使内容条理清晰易懂,还可以弥补语言表达上的不足。
 
议论文的段落结构

与议论文的整体结构布置相类似,在段落的写作中我们也用“三明治”结构来进行写作,即把段落分为主题句(Topic Sentence),支持部分(Supporting Sentences)和结尾句部分(Concluding Sentences)。(注意:并不是每个段落都一定要有结尾句,重要地是要让这个段落自然地结束,不能给读者留下话还没有说完的感觉。)段落结构如下图如示:

  PARAGRAPH

  Topic Sentence

  Supporting Sentences

  Concluding Sentence

接下来我们通过实例来了解主题句,支持句与总结句的布置。比如:

1. Topic Sentence: First of all, the fact is that ready-made meals are not usually that good for us。

Supporting Sentences: They contain high levels of salt and sugar, not to mention harmful preservatives and artificial colorants。

Concluding Sentence: Therefore, a diet that is exclusively made up of such food is bound to be unhealthy。

2. Topic sentence: Teenagers find many ways to drive their parents crazy。

Supporting Sentence 1: First, they may dye their hair purple or they may shave their heads bald. They may also shred their new and expensive jeans and sit hours after hours in front of computers playing games or chatting with someone they never see。

Supporting Sentence 2: In addition, they spend hours windowing-shopping and on the phone. They have time to watch TV, but they do not have time to do their homework。

Supporting Sentence 3: Also, they are always too busy to clean their rooms, but they are never too busy to hang around in the streets。

Concluding Sentence: It is hard to be a teenager, but it is even harder to be parent of one。

3. Topic Sentence: In the second place, corporal punishment is by no means a desirable way of education a child。

Supporting Sentence 1: Numerous studies have shown that it does far more harm than good to children in their mental as well as physical development。

Supporting Sentence 2: For example, corporal punishment can give a child a sense of being treated unfairly, making him rebellious。

Concluding Sentence: This will be detrimental to the molding of the child’s character, and therefore should be avoided。

通过以上例子,我们可以清楚地把握雅思议论文结构(三明治结构),并可以通过练习一些雅思作文题目加以模仿,使得所写的文章结构良好,内容清晰、易读。良好的结构,清晰易读的内容也是好作文的一些特点。另外,朗阁雅思专家建议考生在详细地学会如何发展段落以及组织整篇文章之后,可以把更多的时间放在对一系列常考写作话题“脑力震荡”上,即尽量地准备更多话题的相关地ideas来组织论据。

 

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