enables newly graduates to gain a broader perspective towards the world.3句：Stricken by the magnificent natural and human landscape,these young adults will attain  higher levels of environmental awareness and world peace consciousness. 4句：As the further they explore the natural world and diverse cultures, the deeper understanding these youth will earn towards our mother nature and exotic ethnicities.5句：By the time they return to the classroom,the sense of mission becomes so strong that their appreciation and comprehension of the major will far-outweigh their peers。)

第6-9句：As a further illustration,毕业生选择工作为他们积累了宝贵的工作经验，同时也为他们赢得暂时上的经济独立，更重要的是工作能够帮助他们更好地规划自己未来的职业生涯。相对于同龄人而言，他们因为能够体会工作的艰辛从而珍惜求学机会的来之不易；因为亲身经历职场从而能更清醒地认识到市场的需求；因为经历了工作时的酸甜苦辣从而知道自己的优势和劣势领域。回到学校之后，他们能够更加有针对性的学习自己在职场上所缺失的技巧和知识。(6句：Entering the job market means the outset of their working-experience accumulation,temporary economic independence and sounder career planning.7句： To be more exact,these young people will go through all kinds of tribulations and hardships that they will never encounter on campus.8句：This,in return, informs them of the skills and techniques required by the working sphere as well as their own specific strengths and weaknesses.9句：In this circumstance,rejoining the campus does not only mean earn a university degree,but further enhancing their employability and marketability。)

第三段：探讨该举措的坏处，4句话。

第1句：Accordingly,there also exists some drawbacks which we may not neglect。

第2-3句：To start with, 毕业生们由于缺乏涉世经验而容易受浮华世界的诱惑继而无心求学。(2句：High school graduates may be tempted by material richness of the mundane world that they will be distracted from their normal study.3句：Furthermore, they may become so pragmatic and practical that myriads of campus enjoyments and freshness will be deprived from them。)

第4句：毕业生由于在学校压抑过久以及心智不成熟，马上步入社会有可能会上当受骗或者由于自律能力不强而误入歧途(In addition, teenagers may be depressed for so long a time that hasty entry into the society will result in their unbridled behaviour and some of the e