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雅思真题回顾:专家深度解析09月26日雅思写作真题
核心提示:雅思考试已于昨日(09月26日)结束,本文就写作真题做一个回放及专家的权威点评。
enables newly graduates to gain a broader perspective towards the world.3句:Stricken by the magnificent natural and human landscape,these young adults will attain  higher levels of environmental awareness and world peace consciousness. 4句:As the further they explore the natural world and diverse cultures, the deeper understanding these youth will earn towards our mother nature and exotic ethnicities.5句:By the time they return to the classroom,the sense of mission becomes so strong that their appreciation and comprehension of the major will far-outweigh their peers。)

第6-9句:As a further illustration,毕业生选择工作为他们积累了宝贵的工作经验,同时也为他们赢得暂时上的经济独立,更重要的是工作能够帮助他们更好地规划自己未来的职业生涯。相对于同龄人而言,他们因为能够体会工作的艰辛从而珍惜求学机会的来之不易;因为亲身经历职场从而能更清醒地认识到市场的需求;因为经历了工作时的酸甜苦辣从而知道自己的优势和劣势领域。回到学校之后,他们能够更加有针对性的学习自己在职场上所缺失的技巧和知识。(6句:Entering the job market means the outset of their working-experience accumulation,temporary economic independence and sounder career planning.7句: To be more exact,these young people will go through all kinds of tribulations and hardships that they will never encounter on campus.8句:This,in return, informs them of the skills and techniques required by the working sphere as well as their own specific strengths and weaknesses.9句:In this circumstance,rejoining the campus does not only mean earn a university degree,but further enhancing their employability and marketability。)

第三段:探讨该举措的坏处,4句话。

第1句:Accordingly,there also exists some drawbacks which we may not neglect。

第2-3句:To start with, 毕业生们由于缺乏涉世经验而容易受浮华世界的诱惑继而无心求学。(2句:High school graduates may be tempted by material richness of the mundane world that they will be distracted from their normal study.3句:Furthermore, they may become so pragmatic and practical that myriads of campus enjoyments and freshness will be deprived from them。)

第4句:毕业生由于在学校压抑过久以及心智不成熟,马上步入社会有可能会上当受骗或者由于自律能力不强而误入歧途(In addition, teenagers may be depressed for so long a time that hasty entry into the society will result in their unbridled behaviour and some of the e

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